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[-Toshiba-]

Updated my website.

http://www.abanoubpc.co.nr

I added Payment Options and finished the mainstream AMD system order form. The cheapest computer with Monitor and Keyboard + Mouse sells for $671.00 +tax

My cheapest Gaming computer sells for  $941.00 +tax

Looks good to me.

By The way. The 2 computers stated above come with everything

EDIT - And Please, don't make joke orders I already got 2 Joke orders and they wern't nice. If you'd like to order PM me first since I am not finished my temporary website. My new one will have everything.

Currently in the making (skyblazerspc.co.nr

[-Dexter]

A couple suggestions!

Don't use photos with white backgrounds and no border. Take the time (or at least use the magic wand) and cut out the object, save it as a .PNG or .GIF, and make it look like it's part of the site- and not just a Google picture sitting on top.

And... With every computer, We will install Anti-Virus, and Microsoft Office. Don't capitalize "anti-virus".

[Jebus]

Since you get paid quite a good amount per PC you sell, you could pay an excellent web designer to design your site, instead of us here.

[Chief_Bean]

The random capilatisation of letters would put me off buying.

[-Dexter]

Vishnu, on Oct 29 2008, 06:48 AM, said:

The random capilatisation of letters would put me off buying.

+1.

Your site needs some personality.

Edited by pwn247, 29 October 2008 - 05:51 AM.

[Jebus]

I wouldn't buy your PC's anyway, not offence, but I'm a Mac guy .

[Salem]

Here's a quick layout I did in about 10 minutes, I can help with your website but currently busy:

Edited by Salem, 29 October 2008 - 06:48 AM.

[-Dexter]

Jebus, on Oct 29 2008, 06:55 AM, said:

I wouldn't buy your PC's anyway, not offence, but I'm a Mac guy .

A-Men.

But seriously though, Salem, that's a fantastic layout. I love the colors, and that logo is brilliant.

[Salem]

pwn247, on Oct 29 2008, 04:42 PM, said:

Jebus, on Oct 29 2008, 06:55 AM, said:

I wouldn't buy your PC's anyway, not offence, but I'm a Mac guy .

A-Men.

But seriously though, Salem, that's a fantastic layout. I love the colors, and that logo is brilliant.

Forgot to mention that the computer system illustration was actually found on wikipedia so I shouldn't take any credit for it.

[Pierre.]

Layout looks great though I would suggest you make the menu a bit smaller.

[Lezam]

Salem, on Oct 29 2008, 07:47 AM, said:

Here's a quick layout I did in about 10 minutes, I can help with your website but currently busy:

Cool design man  

[learjet45dream]

Better yet, get a real domain and real web hosting!
And possibly offer different options for RAM and the such. You just say 2GB and 4GB. Maybe add some more detail, like 4GB (4 x 1GB) or 4GB (2 x 2GB). And I really would get a better template.

Oh, and give more info about that guarantee of yours that your computers are at least $700 less than retail price for a prebuild system. What are you going to do if a computer you build isnt?

Edited by learjet45dream, 29 October 2008 - 10:53 AM.

[pyruvate]

Salem, on Oct 29 2008, 05:17 PM, said:

Here's a quick layout I did in about 10 minutes, I can help with your website but currently busy:

You are officially hired for designing my site.  For more info PM, real progress to start about around Nov 20.

[_TW_]

You've still got a LOT of work to do.  Spelling errors, confusing layout & order sheet.  A buyer will not pick the parts themselves, sell different types of PC's where the user just has to click on one link to put in an order instead of them having to fill out each part.

[-Toshiba-]

Thanks Guys, I havn't been on my site for some time because I have a 7 Page French Test tommorow. . I'll be sure to correct my errors tommorow afternoon.

And About the layout, can it not be read? I like a blue background better for my site. Thanks.

[tropicalfish]

Blue is less professional.

[Salem]

Just remember that your website is very important and it will reflect the level of professionalism of your company. If you are serious about this then I'd recommend a couple of things:

-Hire a freelance designer to design your logo and website(will probably cost you the profit of one or two computers but it will be very useful), a google search will bring up a lot of talented individuals who are willing to help you.

-Buy a .com domain name and get a good hosting package(most important thing is uptime since you won't be using much space IMO).

-Change your company name "Abanoub Sky Blazers Computers" to something much shorter and easier to remember, like Abanoub Systems or something similar.

-In order to expose your business to wider audience you would need to do some search-engine optimization and advertising, but given the fact your business is still small and probably offered only to a small number of people I think that wouldn't be necessary.

Good luck!

[pyruvate]

Salem, on Oct 30 2008, 08:12 PM, said:

Just remember that your website is very important and it will reflect the level of professionalism of your company. If you are serious about this then I'd recommend a couple of things:

-Hire a freelance designer to design your logo and website(will probably cost you the profit of one or two computers but it will be very useful), a google search will bring up a lot of talented individuals who are willing to help you.

-Buy a .com domain name and get a good hosting package(most important thing is uptime since you won't be using much space IMO).

-Change your company name "Abanoub Sky Blazers Computers" to something much shorter and easier to remember, like Abanoub Systems or something similar.

-In order to expose your business to wider audience you would need to do some search-engine optimization and advertising, but given the fact your business is still small and probably offered only to a small number of people I think that wouldn't be necessary.

Good luck!

Or you can make it look similar to some famous site like newegg.com, make something like Hatch Computers.com?

Oh and Salem, my PM

[Salem]

Now that I remember it, you might want to check out www.themeforest.com which has a lot of high quality website templates at low prices (10$ and 15$). Good luck!

[-Toshiba-]

Thanks Guys!